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the power of surrender
"wow... fabulous 🫦 an unhinged totally captivating story of total surrender and its power 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 bravo "
Good but inconsistencies
"Was a fun and interesting theme/plot moved along pretty well, but it kept feeling like you ended the chapters similarly in the beginning and that something was gonna happen and then didn't. Repetitive word use that didn't stay consistent with their meaning. Inconsistencies with the state of things, the wheelchair suddenly disappearing, and never being mentioned again and other small bits"
Sorry
"Perhaps it's just me, but I didn't like this story as well as the others. It was quite informative with regards to the BDSM world, which rather fascinated and frightened me at the same time. Please keep up the great work"
