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Heartwarming
"Heartwarming story of love between two people who work together a joint future overcoming their insecurities and past. Chapter 2 is difficult to understand with today and friday plans overlapping. Once you get over chapter 2, the story really takes off"
The best love story I have ever read the best of all thanki so much for letting us read your amazing and beautiful masterpiece
"The best love story I have ever read it was best honestly thanku so much for letting us read your beautiful and amazing live story"
Had potential, but needs editing
"I loved the first chapter, but dropped the story in the second one because the dialog did not make sense anymore. I hope someone will proofread and edit, because I really like the story idea."
