Good story
"Good story "
- कुल रेटिंग
- कहानी
- लेखन शैली
- व्याकरण और विराम चिह्न


"Good story "
"Great writing, needs more chapters! It has a nice balance of ecchi and plot."
"I was confused at first, with Jamie having male and female parts, but it is a good ook and I do recomend it!"
"It's a fun mini story quick right to the point and captures the main characters very quickly "
"i loved this"
"Overall incredibly well written enjoyed it all of it hope you can add more "
"Absolutely love this story its fun naughty and keeps pulling you in "
"My ratings were chosen because this really pulled me in, spiked my wants. "
"I haven't really found anything I dislike, I like how it keeps building up to the next chapter "
"I don’t like that Jamie has both male and female genitalia "
"So far it's very good. Intriguing and erotic. Can't wait to read more."
"This thing might be the best piece of erotic art ever written. Such a unique world and ofcourse, sex. The sex scenes are just so amazing. It's a shame it's incomplete. Idk why the author abandoned this but I hope they someday maybe complete the story or atleast keep writing coz she definitely has a lot of potential, specially in this genre of erotic novels where people don't really think about the content and only the spice."
"I like it a lot and very different with the focus on both him and her attributes."
"I like the way the plot is arranged, its really good and erotic, am enjoying myself so far"