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Great ending

Loved the ending and the questions raised about consciousness.

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Crushed

The ending absolutely crushed me.

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Hard to get into but worth it

It was hard to get into at first but I'm glad I stuck with it, it turned out to be really funny. It felt Monty Python-esq at times. Love making fun of the tropes though.

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I want to see where this goes

I know you said it isn't done but I really want to see where this story goes. You hit on really heavy topics in a short period of time. I would like to see more of their lives and the world around them.

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Great story.

The ending was frustrating. Mostly because I couldn't figure out who was wrong and was looking for an answer, but I think that was intentional. Looking back I still can't figure out which side was wrong. I think it really captures how people freak out and choose the safe path at the first sign of trouble though.

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Interesting take.

Although I don't think art is that trivial, but maybe that's the satirical part of the story.

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Interesting story structure.

I don't think I've ever seen a story with that plot structure before. It was unique to say the least.

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Great ending!

Loved the twist.

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Unexpectedly funny.

It took me slightly off guard, I was expecting a fight and the next thing you know they were talking about a hedge row.

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