LBHarpdog

NEBRASKA

Im a hopless romantic. These stories mainly for women, Most of us guys don't fulfill her needs, Men forget to make love to her mind, before touching her body. I write to engage her mind. Enjoy

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Zombie story

This book is movie worthy... im gonna read it again, but the way the author captures humanity the good bad and ugly is simply amazing. I had never seen a zombie like this before... it almost had mein tears a few time.... the concept is sooo original that this couldbe sold to nexflix.... great job.... and I usually dont read zombie books .. 😊

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Fading Memoried

Wow... great emotion.... and ut was a short but awesome mystery ...one of love and loss and lonelinesd... good job...making me feel your words... instead of just reading 👍😘😋

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Blind Love

Now this story is just getting interesting... a sexy yet wonderful story about real ladies focused and ready to take action against.......

I wont ruin it... but WOW girl great job

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Viper Toy

This is a great start to a book. I woukd love to see more detail into any sex scene... so I can be stimulated mentally and physically.. but other than that ... great job..

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True Bliss

A book that keeps your heart racing, your head involved. A love between 2 people like none other... simply fantastic

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I Dare You

What suspense, and turn of events and just crazy amazing story. This book is a must read 😁😊🤗

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Promise

Good start.

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Blindfold meet

Wow, I cant wait to read more... great job

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Sage

This story was unique and a bit of truth. It was also steamy great job sofar

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One Shots

So sulrty, sinful, sexy as hell, and simply orgasmic.... great job.

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The Bounty Hunter

This story was pretty good. I has an excellent start to it. You should try to finish this story...

keep up thhe good writing

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Dauggters in Love.....

I liked the hobbits, but this was very well written. I liked the humor, and the curious girls. And a protective father who wanring to sheild his girls from danger. But all things said... it was pretty good. Thank you for writting and letting me read your book.

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The Collection

Now this Book is one for a movie.... I see the charaters, learning about how cocky a killer becomes, and how smart the victim is. When it comes to original.... this book is awesome.... Plus... i never read murder mysteries...but i dont see much erotica in this book? But even beside little erotica, this book is captivating...LMAO AND I HATE READING. So to keep me reading this long says alot about your writing.... I bow to you out of respect.
A job well done, but you definantl need more sex..... for me anyways.🙈
Thank you

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Legacy of Dane

Wow this book is awesome.... has quite a bit of everthing..... this would be a good movie some day.... great job

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Brian

I can truly see this like a short movie.... it was very well written...very good description of actions, and choice of words.... not bad fo English being a second language

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Sexy as fuck

Omg ... i sroked and stroked .... and i learned im into father daughter... lol great job

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Welcome to the Psych ward

These poems are different. Its like a mind expressing itself with each diffrent story. Only the writer knows the true meaning, but they are well written, very descriptive, and all from a creative mind. Its hard to put a review on sanity/insanity ...

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Strictly Business Proprosal

This book has a great outline. The characters are described very well. Maybe the other chapters are better, but i was looking to connect with the main character but wasn't able to. Maybe find a way to Spice up events to an intersting turn, or a shock and awe reveal... So far... pretty good job.

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Resurrection

This is an interesting concept so far. Its a little cliche as far as asking a guy out goes. And a few gramical errors lost the flow for me. The book cover is what draws a person in, and the book cover does not intice me to read this book. So far the development of this book is coming along good. Lol i wonder what the will happen next. Wonderful job on your cliffhanger

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A Midnight Occurance

Wow. this book was interesting it made you travel. It also made you feel all the emotions from fear to lust. The feel of the book was really interesting, you never knew where she was taking you. Great job....

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If Passion Could speak

Ok I usually don't write reviews, but DAMN, this is a great book. it was enticing, and Heaven can tell a fantastic story. 5 stars all around. I love the Anastasia, how she realized money didn't make her happy, and that she had more fun with a guy who was interested in her than her money. But i liked the way she was very passionate in bed. So Steamy. Great Job. But one thing you could do to be a little more sensual , is describe how they are feeling throughout the sex, just like you do during the dance encounter with Tyler. Keep up the fantastic work.

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