LBHarpdog

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Im a hopless romantic. These stories mainly for women, Most of us guys don't fulfill her needs, Men forget to make love to her mind, before touching her body. I write to engage her mind. Enjoy

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Spectacular

I fell in love with Ellie. She is a strong woman who doesn't want to follow the social norm. I love how she meets her inner wolf., Leia. I love how this book is about the inner struggles of the heart of wanting someone, but not sure if it will be accepted. It brings out emotions of love, hate desires, and rejection. This story shows it from her inner thoughts. I love that.

This is a must read.... fantastic

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S.A.M.

This was a great and errie story just the same. You had no clue what was going to happen and just sat there on the suspenful ride... grest job. You are doing so well wrtting.

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Great for a second laguage story

This story will be awesome once you get it edited. So whatever people say, you gave a real talent for writing. I'm proud of you for working hard to become a writer

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Tell me

This author touches alot on how writing has saved millions of lives, including mine. Writing helps the soul to ease the pain. Also Poerty is to be interpreted in each persons own way. So the mirror I saw in her poem can be found at the bottom of the page, great job Boo for touching my heart... ๐Ÿ˜

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Zombie story

This book is movie worthy... im gonna read it again, but the way the author captures humanity the good bad and ugly is simply amazing. I had never seen a zombie like this before... it almost had mein tears a few time.... the concept is sooo original that this couldbe sold to nexflix.... great job.... and I usually dont read zombie books .. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Fading Memoried

Wow... great emotion.... and ut was a short but awesome mystery ...one of love and loss and lonelinesd... good job...making me feel your words... instead of just reading ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‹

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Nice

Great start... ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜

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Great start...

This book is off to a great start. It sucks you in and draws your attention and gets your heart ready for one hell of a fight... so excited to follow more.

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BLOOD MOON RISING

This book is simply fantastic.
I'ts a movie in your head and an emotional roller-coaster. You won't want to put it down once you start. So when it comes to a book you can excape the world through, you found it. I can't give this book enough praises. So good job Lizona Jane... you really did a great job on this book. Thank you for suggesting a swap review. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Good job for a book not in your 1st language

This story has a fantastic start. The characters are really relatible. The events of the story was pretty good. Nice job... keep writing.

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EXPRESSIONS

These spoke to me in a way i never imagined... fighting to stay alive one day at a time. Its words like these that help.... thank beautiful writer

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This story is very good, it can be epic

You have a very good base story.... good flow, I would love to fall in love or like the characters more. I suggest trying to use more descriptive words when describing the touch..like her hand was as soft as a pillow. Her lips were red as cherrys, and ripe for the picking. Or the heat from her body when he stood close could melt the north pole. But you are doing very well... i love the flashback. ...

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Nice job

So simple, yet so beautiful... great job ... you are only going to get better.

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Great Job

This story starts off slow... but he does a fantastic job with history and imaginations... and the time travel idea is awesome... great job

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Nice

Pretty good job and lots of action...

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Excelent so far

Omg let me just say... this writer captures your attention 9n the first page...lol and you have no clue what is going on.....but i look forward to more of the story to come... fantastic job.

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Lol... good job

This story is cute and simple...a nice story of relaxation.... liked it alot. Thank you

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Erotica

I found this story a bit cliche, but very interesting. To be able to see actions and understand her thoughts was very good. The sex scenes turned me on. And it leaves you wanting the next story... good job

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Hard Love

I gotta admit, this book does a good job showing how to character felt, what she was thinking and getting you hooked from page one... great job. Keep up the wonderful work.

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German Town Boy

This is actually pretty good it git me worked up... pretty good

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Exit Plan

This story is one of humor heart and love. You cant help but wonder what and how since you already know the end... great job.

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Vampire

This is an exciting start. You drew me in. Now lets see more.

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Erotic Saga

This is a pretty good story so far, and James is exactly what every woman wants.
Even though it is just 2 chapters... it will only get better... great job

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Viper Toy

This is a great start to a book. I woukd love to see more detail into any sex scene... so I can be stimulated mentally and physically.. but other than that ... great job..

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True Bliss

A book that keeps your heart racing, your head involved. A love between 2 people like none other... simply fantastic

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Promise

Good start.

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Blindfold meet

Wow, I cant wait to read more... great job

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Sage

This story was unique and a bit of truth. It was also steamy great job sofar

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One Shots

So sulrty, sinful, sexy as hell, and simply orgasmic.... great job.

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The Bounty Hunter

This story was pretty good. I has an excellent start to it. You should try to finish this story...

keep up thhe good writing

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Dauggters in Love.....

I liked the hobbits, but this was very well written. I liked the humor, and the curious girls. And a protective father who wanring to sheild his girls from danger. But all things said... it was pretty good. Thank you for writting and letting me read your book.

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The Collection

Now this Book is one for a movie.... I see the charaters, learning about how cocky a killer becomes, and how smart the victim is. When it comes to original.... this book is awesome.... Plus... i never read murder mysteries...but i dont see much erotica in this book? But even beside little erotica, this book is captivating...LMAO AND I HATE READING. So to keep me reading this long says alot about your writing.... I bow to you out of respect.
A job well done, but you definantl need more sex..... for me anyways.๐Ÿ™ˆ
Thank you

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Legacy of Dane

Wow this book is awesome.... has quite a bit of everthing..... this would be a good movie some day.... great job

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Brian

I can truly see this like a short movie.... it was very well written...very good description of actions, and choice of words.... not bad fo English being a second language

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Sexy as fuck

Omg ... i sroked and stroked .... and i learned im into father daughter... lol great job

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Welcome to the Psych ward

These poems are different. Its like a mind expressing itself with each diffrent story. Only the writer knows the true meaning, but they are well written, very descriptive, and all from a creative mind. Its hard to put a review on sanity/insanity ...

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A Midnight Occurance

Wow. this book was interesting it made you travel. It also made you feel all the emotions from fear to lust. The feel of the book was really interesting, you never knew where she was taking you. Great job....

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