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Welcome to MIND NIGHT BLUE.

MHSTY.... What does that mean? It was my way of saying I Love You to a woman I gave my heart to. MIND NIGHT BLUE is my raw emotions about how I felt about her. Heart is still wanting her.

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Raw and Real

I loved the way you see love in a innocent light. I used to feel that way. You are very good with your poems.

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SEXY AS HELL

This story is one that will take you on an emotional ride of love pain joy sorrow and even frustration. If you haven't read this....then start now you will not be disappointed ๐Ÿ˜

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AMAZING

I'm only halfway through and I love this story. I have the attention span of a squirrel. But Kariimia was done such a fabulous job of giving your mind an image that keeps you guessing and cheering or sad. Grest job playing with my emotions. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š

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Great Story

This story has a great flow to it. And the humor is good. The author does a great job carrying the story along. Make sure to use the punctuation to help enphasize the coversations. Great job.

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Pretty Good

The story starts off slow and 6ou have to get to chapter 9 before it speeds up. But after that it is relatively good. Its like a movie and Its it interesting. Give it a read and enjoy a rollercoaster ride of emotions.... good job .

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Positive

I love this ..... good vibes.

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Love It

I love the 3 friends theory.. it has never been so true

1) Friends for a reason
2) Friends for a season
3) Friends for a ljfetime

I never heard this, but I love it

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Good

Very good poem... I love your choice of words

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Interesting

This story has the beginning of a great story. I look forward to reading the rest of it.

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Interesting

It was good. But I would have loved to know everyones role at the start. But you are very good at keeping the story interesting. Good jo.

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Fantastic

This book is definantley a movie in my head. The action, the emotion, the steamy parts. This book has it all. For those of you considering reading this book. Just start now... and comment along the way. You will not be dissapointed. Great job

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Spectacular

I fell in love with Ellie. She is a strong woman who doesn't want to follow the social norm. I love how she meets her inner wolf., Leia. I love how this book is about the inner struggles of the heart of wanting someone, but not sure if it will be accepted. It brings out emotions of love, hate desires, and rejection. This story shows it from her inner thoughts. I love that.

This is a must read.... fantastic

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S.A.M.

This was a great and errie story just the same. You had no clue what was going to happen and just sat there on the suspenful ride... grest job. You are doing so well wrtting.

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Great Job

This story starts off slow... but he does a fantastic job with history and imaginations... and the time travel idea is awesome... great job

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Great for a second laguage story

This story will be awesome once you get it edited. So whatever people say, you gave a real talent for writing. I'm proud of you for working hard to become a writer

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Tell me

This author touches alot on how writing has saved millions of lives, including mine. Writing helps the soul to ease the pain. Also Poerty is to be interpreted in each persons own way. So the mirror I saw in her poem can be found at the bottom of the page, great job Boo for touching my heart... ๐Ÿ˜

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Zombie story

This book is movie worthy... im gonna read it again, but the way the author captures humanity the good bad and ugly is simply amazing. I had never seen a zombie like this before... it almost had mein tears a few time.... the concept is sooo original that this couldbe sold to nexflix.... great job.... and I usually dont read zombie books .. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Fading Memoried

Wow... great emotion.... and ut was a short but awesome mystery ...one of love and loss and lonelinesd... good job...making me feel your words... instead of just reading ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‹

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Simply Honest and Awesome

Writing about subjects like this is not easy. Ellie's story is one that makes you wonder if you did everything to protect your family, your kids and your spouse. Being blamed for letting those sexual things happen is not fair. But seeing the effect it has on Ellie tears my heart apart.
You are doing a fantastic job Michelle. Please keep going. You never know who else you may be helping with your story.
I'm soooo proud of you.

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Fantastic so far

I'm only 4 chapters in and this story has captured me. It starts out slow, but leads up to a tantalizing mind tease. This book can be a very good one. Don't wait too long author to update it. ๐Ÿ˜

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Unexpected Surprise

This story plays with your mind and sucks you in. It has you actually watching these characters and feeling their emotions. Its a well rounded story as well as very descriptive. Good job...lol now hurry and finish this damn book ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ . Simply awesome

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Fantastic start

this was action packed right from the start. Very descriptive and very vivid. Great job.

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Very good

This story has the potential to be a great book. The beginning is strong. Don't wait too long to update. You could lose readers. Loving the plot as well as the lead characters and also the personalities so far. Great job

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Six chapters in... and you are hooked.

this story captures my mind and heart. It is a great intro to story. This Book has the potential to be a very excellent story. Great job. I'm loving this.

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This story can be a fanatic one.

I am reviewing what I have so far. The concept is a great one. Try to make the location of the conversations know first before the speak. Ex. Sleeping in the truck, Starr starts to hear and see..... This is how to set up a scene so we can follow easier. And grammar is a big one. If your word is misspelled, then the flow of the story is lost. Its like kissing in the moment then a knock at a door happens. So try to keep the flow with good grammar and punctuation. You are doing so very good. Keep going

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Nice Start.

Great job.

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AMAZING

Everything is awesome....

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AMAZING

I like this story because the author lets you into the head of the MC. You can feel her emotions by the way the author describes her. Fantastic. And to share anxiety in a book is very hard to do. This book can be a great book. Lets see how the story unfolds.... VERY GOOD JOB

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Must read

I love the vivid back story as well as the connection of the characters. Fabulous

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Not bad

Everyone else gave you great advice. Just remember, that advice is good.. but it is your story. It has good flow and is very interesting great job

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Action packed and Amazing

This story is one you have to read for yourself. I will not give any spiolers... but the author didcan amazing job.. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜

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Very good

This story is a good one. I felt emotions and many diffrent mind sets. You did a great job developing the story. Fabulous

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Poetic

This story is very poetic. It gives mental images that shows your mind beauty. A strong willed woman that has a hard time trusting.... but still challenges everyone... nice story

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Simply Awesome

This story is a great story, action pact. I love how its being developed. This is going to be an excellent story as soon as this story is done... fantastic job this is a must read.

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WOW

I have never read a story with this much poerty written. At times i had to reread to undertsand its meaning. So a word of caution. For a person who is new to tge English language, or doesn't understand poetic themes, this story will be hard for them and they will over look it. Remember that if your audience in just English great speakers, this story is perfect. But for those who are learning English, you may need to use simple common words they understand to reach their heart with your story.

Beautiful use of imagry when writing... great job.

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Great start of a story.

I love the damily together atmosphere... its still early... but it is a comfort story... I can wait to see the rest good job

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THE BOOK YOU MUST READ

At first I thought it started out like any other book. But the more I read, the better it got. The author draws you in and will make you love and wonder what is going to happen next. Trust me, you won't want to miss this fantastic story.

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Simple but Wonderful

Dreams and nighmares are often had in one single moment. This story was well written as well as fun to read. You did very good ๐Ÿ˜

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Must Read....

This book started out slow...and has alot of filler parts that dont really move the story along.... but when certain parts are revealed, they are presented that would have you happy sad or mad... great job

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Interesting

This story is one that is full of emotion and yet keeps you guessing... it is still a good story. Good job.

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OMG.... SO GREAT

For a person who has ever had an online affair... this is exactly how it happens. And the expectations are so real in this story... grest job... i am hooked.

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Great start

This can be amazing... during sex scenes, use more descriptions of the act it shows the reader ...instead of telling. You have a great start of a good story

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Amazing Twist

This is a great twist on the Alpha story... I mean to have a mate go lazy and leave pack and become a regular guy is awesome... great job

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This story has potential

This story can be a great crazy story. The author is doing very good for a person who has English as a second language. Keep going and writing.

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Fantastic story

This story can be a great story. The scen is set up well, emotions are running high. And the introduction to the pack was a very good start... very good job author

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Very Interesting story

To lose a parent is hard, but this story shows how a family can stick together. Also shows innocence in its early stages. Good job at showing the different personallities among siblings. Also the beggining crushes of Ally and Audric. But Audric is my favorite. Good job.

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Couldn't stop reading

This story is one that will keep you reading. I love the teasing of the characters. And damn... the sex scene where he at her was delicious. All I have to say was I was addicted to reading... great job

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This story could be great

This story can almost be a great action movie. I look forward to following this story. ๐Ÿ˜

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WOW A MUST READ

If you want an emotional rollacoaster ride, with steamy sex as well as action packed. Look no further. This story will have you happy, sad, scared, and turned on with this crazy family dynamics. All I have tosay is just read, and you will see what I mean. Enjoy ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ˜Ž

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This book is awesme

I loved this story. It captures my imagination and shows emoitions a geart deal. Great job Gabriel.

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Unique and Awesome

This story captivates you, keeps you guessing and is very much action packed. I was very impressed with the story line as well as the way the story was presented. The only thing I would like to see is who is speaking a little more clearly. But fantastic job my friend.
THIS IS A MUST READ.

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Fun story

This story was a fun read. An adventure to experience.... good job author๐Ÿ˜

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Hidden gem read.

This book has the ability to be a fantastic read. The start is awesome. I cant wait to read more updates.... great job author.

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Has alot of potetial.

This story can be very good. Is Starts slow, I would love to see more of the relationship between the characters as early as chapter 3. It is a good story, but I liked to be hooked by chapter 2 or 3 and have cliffhangers at the end of most chapters.

You are off to a great start, so make sure you read it out loud to yourself, and you will catch most of your grammar or mistakes. .... keep doing a wonderful job. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Facinating...

I will give you credit... its hard writing in English... but you did pretty good. Try using word doc on computer to fix alot of your grammar mistakes..lol but you did get me a little hard while reading this story... good job so far.

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Great story

Good story, goid suuspense, and great acti9n scenes. This book ous a must read for wolf and shufter l9vers.

Great job.

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Nice job

Very action packed and intriguing.

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Great start...

This book is off to a great start. It sucks you in and draws your attention and gets your heart ready for one hell of a fight... so excited to follow more.

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BLOOD MOON RISING

This book is simply fantastic.
I'ts a movie in your head and an emotional roller-coaster. You won't want to put it down once you start. So when it comes to a book you can excape the world through, you found it. I can't give this book enough praises. So good job Lizona Jane... you really did a great job on this book. Thank you for suggesting a swap review. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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Good job for a book not in your 1st language

This story has a fantastic start. The characters are really relatible. The events of the story was pretty good. Nice job... keep writing.

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This story is very good, it can be epic

You have a very good base story.... good flow, I would love to fall in love or like the characters more. I suggest trying to use more descriptive words when describing the touch..like her hand was as soft as a pillow. Her lips were red as cherrys, and ripe for the picking. Or the heat from her body when he stood close could melt the north pole. But you are doing very well... i love the flashback. ...

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Nice job

So simple, yet so beautiful... great job ... you are only going to get better.

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Nice

Pretty good job and lots of action...

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Excelent so far

Omg let me just say... this writer captures your attention 9n the first page...lol and you have no clue what is going on.....but i look forward to more of the story to come... fantastic job.

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Lol... good job

This story is cute and simple...a nice story of relaxation.... liked it alot. Thank you

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Erotica

I found this story a bit cliche, but very interesting. To be able to see actions and understand her thoughts was very good. The sex scenes turned me on. And it leaves you wanting the next story... good job

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Hard Love

I gotta admit, this book does a good job showing how to character felt, what she was thinking and getting you hooked from page one... great job. Keep up the wonderful work.

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German Town Boy

This is actually pretty good it git me worked up... pretty good

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Exit Plan

This story is one of humor heart and love. You cant help but wonder what and how since you already know the end... great job.

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Vampire

This is an exciting start. You drew me in. Now lets see more.

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Erotic Saga

This is a pretty good story so far, and James is exactly what every woman wants.
Even though it is just 2 chapters... it will only get better... great job

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Viper Toy

This is a great start to a book. I woukd love to see more detail into any sex scene... so I can be stimulated mentally and physically.. but other than that ... great job..

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True Bliss

A book that keeps your heart racing, your head involved. A love between 2 people like none other... simply fantastic

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I Dare You

What suspense, and turn of events and just crazy amazing story. This book is a must read ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—

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Promise

Good start.

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Blindfold meet

Wow, I cant wait to read more... great job

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One Shots

So sulrty, sinful, sexy as hell, and simply orgasmic.... great job.

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The Bounty Hunter

This story was pretty good. I has an excellent start to it. You should try to finish this story...

keep up thhe good writing

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Dauggters in Love.....

I liked the hobbits, but this was very well written. I liked the humor, and the curious girls. And a protective father who wanring to sheild his girls from danger. But all things said... it was pretty good. Thank you for writting and letting me read your book.

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The Collection

Now this Book is one for a movie.... I see the charaters, learning about how cocky a killer becomes, and how smart the victim is. When it comes to original.... this book is awesome.... Plus... i never read murder mysteries...but i dont see much erotica in this book? But even beside little erotica, this book is captivating...LMAO AND I HATE READING. So to keep me reading this long says alot about your writing.... I bow to you out of respect.
A job well done, but you definantl need more sex..... for me anyways.๐Ÿ™ˆ
Thank you

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Legacy of Dane

Wow this book is awesome.... has quite a bit of everthing..... this would be a good movie some day.... great job

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Brian

I can truly see this like a short movie.... it was very well written...very good description of actions, and choice of words.... not bad fo English being a second language

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Welcome to the Psych ward

These poems are different. Its like a mind expressing itself with each diffrent story. Only the writer knows the true meaning, but they are well written, very descriptive, and all from a creative mind. Its hard to put a review on sanity/insanity ...

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Resurrection

This is an interesting concept so far. Its a little cliche as far as asking a guy out goes. And a few gramical errors lost the flow for me. The book cover is what draws a person in, and the book cover does not intice me to read this book. So far the development of this book is coming along good. Lol i wonder what the will happen next. Wonderful job on your cliffhanger

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A Midnight Occurance

Wow. this book was interesting it made you travel. It also made you feel all the emotions from fear to lust. The feel of the book was really interesting, you never knew where she was taking you. Great job....

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