Meticulous Rice

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Hey! I enjoy writing so I'm here to share it with you!! check out my books and don't hesitate to leave feedback. You can call me A!

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Magical

This took me to another world of fantasy! The way everything was described is just so magical and definitely a page-turner. I love how they grew up every other chapter, smart ;) I love everything about this book!
fantasy isn't really my favorite genre but this one definitely passes. keep on writing!

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Compelling!!

I'm in love with your writing and the pace your story goes in. I find myself wanting to read more and more and intrigued to know what happens next. I must say you have unique and creative names that make the book all the more interesting as well as that I did not see any flaws in the story, you totally deserve these stars, keep it up!!

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interesting!

I found the book very intriguing and I really loved how you put the ideas together, no overflow of ideas or cramped up chapters. quite a captivating story and summary. Your vocab's make the story all the more interesting and I absolutely love your book cover.
It also really reminds me of divergent!!

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Good, could be improved.

Hey there!! I know I promised a review so sorry it took me this long. Honestly by the name and the cover I had no idea I was going to read a werewolf story!
Your book is great, but with how the paragraphs are compressed it is very hard to read, they are too packed if you know what I mean?? Like I noticed you had a whole chapter that consisted of one long paragraph which readers don't usually like. I myself used to have pretty packed paragraphs when I first started writing, but as you write more you improve. So just change that and a few grammatical errors you have and you'll have the readers hooked.

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BE MY ANGEL

Hey hey! Let's start with the great flow your book has, it's not my writing style but it almost forces the reader to continue reading the book, you have a really great plot too!! The only thing I would recommend is to not put her thoughts in brackets but to write them in italics instead because personally I feel like the brackets slows the reader down and confuses them.
Overall, it's an awesome book.

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Amazing ♡

Your writing style just AMAZED me, it had me hooked on the book, usually these genre's aren't my cup of tea but yours sure is an exception, I just love the suspense and the mystery and the way you portrayed everything!! Love it, keep it up!

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I love it!

This is a romance novel with many thrilling moments in it, so many ups and downs for the two lovers, yet they stay together? They get through it. If you love plot twists and gangs, this book is definitely for you. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it.

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Unconditionally

Woah, The emotions you portrayed in the prologue were indescribable! I love this book and how you describe everything. Can't want to see more.

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Great

It is a very nice book, pretty interesting and I would love to read more, I just think you should space out your paragraphs in the first chapter.
Apart from some confusion, I love it, you had me from the summary.

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The villa

Hey, I know it took a while, but as promised here is your review.
First, let me say I like the way you describe things, it's very descriptive so I applaud you on that.

However, one thing that bothered me was how compact your paragraphs are, you need to space it out a little more, it works well to keep the reader focused and continue reading.

Now don't let this discourage you, my writing isn't perfect. But I started out just like you, it is my first story so I had no experience and all my paragraphs were compact until I got a comment from 'A.I Medina' which helped me allot.

Other than compact paragraphs your book is great, it could use some improvement here and there, when you're done writing it you can go back and edit it all and fixing simple punctuation errors.

Editing while writing can be hard and stressful which is why I suggested you do it after you're done. I hope this helped and please don't be discouraged. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, it has a great plot!! xxx.

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Hidden

very well written! you had me hooked. I love hoe Andrew and Kyle are opposites and the way you described everything. the first chapter was definitely a great way to start the book, especially ending it with a cliff hanger. Also, I love the book cover too! would recommend this to mystery lovers for sure. keep it up.

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simply. AMAZING.

Omg I am literally in love with the relationship between Robyn and Adrian. Your way of writing is just so good I am amazed, you described everything so perfectly, it's simply beautiful and I could picture it all in front of me. I love everything about this book but it is a bit long for my liking I must admit, but hey you did warn us about that!! ;)
Overall, this book is just brilliant and it deserves every single one of the stars I gave it! I would totally recommend it to people!

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Love it

I love your writing style so much, it keeps me wondering what happens next? the way you describe things is so captivating and makes me want to read more! definitely a page-turner. no mistakes either, I would definitely recommend this book for someone who loves this genre. Keep it up!!

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AMAZING

I would recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy. It is one of the best I've read and I can definitely see this on a bookshelf one day. The way you describe things is just very astonishing and leaves me wanting to see more. It is so well put together I can see it play out in front of me. Your writing skills will never fail to amaze me and I love the plot. Keep it up!

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Captivating!

I love the storyline so much!! The flow of the story is great and it all first in together. You had me hooked from the first chapter. The way you write played a big part in making this stop such a captivating one. I saw no errors anywhere apart from one or two typos that sneaked in. Serenity is such a brave character and I would love to see more of this.

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Amazing!

Honestly when I first decided to read it I had no idea what to expect but I did not expect something this good. I love the way you rhyme the words and make them flow perfectly and still have meaning. I would definitely love to see this turn into a book someday in the future. I can see these being taught in schools too!! keep it up.

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so good!

wow this book is amazing and it's only the beginning of it! I love how you started it and made the plot flow so easily. I definitely would want to read more of it. keep on writing.
I really love your book cover.

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Awesome!

I love this book so much! it's definitely a page-turner and I find myself wanting to read more. the flow is very cool and the plot is compelling and not rushed. It makes me feel like I'm with Quince and I'm looking forward to reading more of this book! keep updating.

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good but could be improved.

I did not expect to be reading an emotional story, the emotions are portrayed very well in the first chapter despite it being short. however, I found it pretty confusing which is why I think you should use names instead of "her". I'm pretty sure the plot you have in your mind is great I just think you might have trouble putting your thoughts together and turning them into a story. I believe that if you practice more you'll improve greatly so don't be discouraged. your story just needs a good amount of editing and proofreading to become a better one.

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destined to be with you

I love the plot and I find them really cute. I know English isn't your first language so I understand why the grammar and language aren't perfect but I do believe that it will improve with time, we all have errors so don't be disappointed. Just keep on writing and I'm looking forward to more. ps. I love the book cover.

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interesting plot

I love your story and how detailed it is. the dialog is very interesting and I find myself wanting to read more. Emma's character stands out so much because she isn't perfect, she is flawed just like a normal human. It's very intriguing how she changes from being sweet to being unbothered. I saw no flaws in the story grammar or punctuation wise. It's a very good plot keep writing. Looking forward to reading more of it.

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nice!

I'm loving the story so far but I did notice some typing errors in your story which is normal, if you fix those it will be perfect. I love the plot and the way you introduced the characters not failing to leave anything out. It gets better the more I read, keep it up!!

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great story!

I have only read the beginning so far and I'm in love with it. I like the pace it is going at and the way you started it off. However, I did notice the use of many short sentences and I think there could be improvement in that to help the story flow more freely. keep it up!

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enthralling!

The story totally captures the reader's attention from the first chapter, you are very descriptive which I totally love and makes me want to read more of it!!

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great start!

I love the suspense you built in the prologue, it totally makes me want to read more of it. The summary captured me in an instant even though I don't often read mystery books!

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clever!

reading trapping Quincy i wasn't very fond Gideon, but this book made me love him, i love the way you made them meet!!

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the bestt

I read this before reading Gideon and I love them both equally, your plots are very creative and intriguing.

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compelling!

I love the book so far, I find it very compelling and I think your way of introducing the characters was very new and clever, I haven't seen anyone do that before! Your writing style is really good and I don't find myself getting bored.

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