Interesting read 😻!
"To author 💓: aside from some grammatical errors, your storyline made for a sweet young love story ❤. You captured the struggles between 2 young couples. The story's climax was built up but story was deflated in the end. You wrote about Ellie's & Jaime's confrontation in which they spoke about their problem that caused their breakup but you dropped the ball so-to-speak for Luke & Beatrice. I was interested up to the point when Bea found out, hid in an empty classroom to have a breakdown & then met Luke in the hallway right after but the story fizzled in the end. Luke & Beatrice didn't have a real confrontation like Jamie & Ellie did. That brief meeting in the hallway when she found out about the bet didn't quite cut it for me. Their moment to really confront each other about this, letting us readers know how that couple handled the 'bet'? You went from them briefly talking about the discovery of the bet in the school hallway to them ending at the concert & going to his house afterwards?? The ending would have been better if it entailed Luke & Beatrice talking, fighting, showing their hurt /angry emotions with a resolution put right in-between the time of her finding out & them showing up at the concert. The ending felt rushed, cut short without this information. Otherwise, up to that point the book was good. "