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Ties in love
"This book has kept me on my toes not knowing what is going to happen next "
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Ties In Love
"I am enjoying this drama, can’t wait for the next chapters, please 🤗🤔"
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Awesome
"this was a great story and also a real one. We have many people like Luka and jade's mom around us. So you have wrote a genius story "
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Wow
"I really like this story, u r a great author and I can't wait to finish ur other stories! "
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Loved It
"Great job overall. Can’t wait to read more of your stories"
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Liked the story
"I think the premise of the plot is well thought. The writing style is easy to read, however during times of the dialogue I felt it was difficult to know which character was speaking. Might think about adding in "said Jade." or something like that. Not to often then it begins to repeat and becomes wordy. I also felt the plot jumped ahead quickly between incidents with Jade. I think for the longer version of the book, if this is going to become a full fledged book, do a little more background and character building for each person and round out the plot more. I think this will help a reader get more attached to the main character or any of the supporting ones. Overall, I really like the storyline and would like to know more on what happens next. Hope it ends well for Jade and her brother, from what I imagine they need it."
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Good
"Poor girl, hope it ends well for her and the brother 😢"
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My Review
"There are many instances where things can be worded better, and your story has some grammar mistakes. The characters are well thought out and the plot is decent, but it felt as though things were rushed and the story lacked my interest. This story has potential, so I would work on it more, Thanks for sharing the story though! "
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