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I hope this is not the end?

"Great story and character development. I hope you write more to this or a sequel. Thank you for sharing."

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Racing for your heart

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it can't wait to read book 2"

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Racing For Your Heart

"Great story. Love how the racing circuit made everything so intriguing. Didn’t see that ending coming so was very sad at the end"

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Needs Work

"I think this story could use a lot of TLC. The dialogue is unnatural, there are points where the grammar issues are really hard to read through, and the characters are flat. I think the plot could potentially be good, but the technical issues make it really hard to enjoy it, especially since the dialogue makes up a majority of each chapter and the dialogue is the part that needs the most improvement. As I said with your other stories, repair the dialogue, and then you may have a more captivating book. Hope this helps!"

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