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AMAZING READ

"The plot is good ups and downs and how they understand eachother listening not assuming the context. Exicted to keep reading "

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Just Brilliant, and Drool Worthy🥰🤤🥰🤤

"I absolutely loved this story, it was brilliant, spicy, hilarious, hot, tragic, and just plain amazing. You did a brilliant job author, and you are a wonderful writer who brought amazing characters to life. This story made me emotional, and I felt for the characters as if they were people I knew. I have nothing but positive feelings towards this story, and I wish it didn't have to end. Thank you author for this amazing experience, I truly enjoyed Hanzo's journey."

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Amazing Book

"Absolutely fantastic read…."

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Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

"OMG! I completely loved it! The plot and details were amazing. The story was a roller coaster of a ride. You never know what's going to happen. Great job. Keep up the amazing work."

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The prefect collide

"This book is a roller-coaster and I'm happily along for the ride I love each and every character while despising others, I definitely would recommend this book to anyone that asks and I would 100% read it again "

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Story

"Really great plot and story line. "

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The perfect collide

"Very good , very steamy I love every chapter ."

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Love story

"Lovely story I'm in love with it"

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Great!!

"Wow, what a book! Were there grammar issues in it? Yes. But overall the story was great and I enjoyed all 800+ pages of it. Great job author."

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Amazing story?

"It was an amazing story, catchy and it kept me on edge the whole time. I loved the chemistry between Lorenzo and Handa, how they loved and supported each other through everything."

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The perfect collide

"I swear main this is simply one of the best novels I've read in my entire life. I laugh I cried I held my breath I was dam aroused main all emotions that exists I felt and know you will feel while reading this one. Hats off main blood caat amazing me seh! You won't be disappointed "

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Extraordinar, awesome and wonderful

"You succeeded! This is a very, very, very wonderful story. "

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The Perfect Collide

"Good story. ALOT of interesting twists and turns. Crazy people. I LOVE Ryder!!!! Sorry, but I have seen quite a few typos/wording issues.... something that stands/jumps out @ me. But good story. "

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Amaze Balls

" This story is riveting and I love the characters and interaction. I’d give this book a 20 star rating. It captivated me from the beginning. Keep up the excellent writing. I’m a writer myself and I hope to aspire to writing like yours. "

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That was amazing

"How how how how is there no more😭💔 I loved every bit of it. Ty"

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The Perfect collide

"Aaargh! I really didn’t like Jake from the start. And Leo is no liar! He had been honest with Han from day one. It’s understandable that you won’t give your real name to a stranger, i mean who gives his full name to a wrong number caller? Han should not take it against leo, ‘Leo’ can also be a nickname for Lorenzo y’know. So no biggie. Next chapter pleasssse!!!"

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GAHDAMN.

"Deadass in love with this istgs sksksksndke"

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I love it like mad

"I love lorenzo for handa not jake please "

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Great work

"The description of Enzo's hands is always the same. Maybe it would be better not to use the same adjective, especially when his hands are being mentioned so frequently. Please keep in mind the grammar for the past tense questions. And lastly, away and a way are not the same thing, and this most likely was a typo or an autocorrection mistake, but it is distracting. Apart from this, great work, and thank you for putting your work out here for us to enjoy."

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Review

"I like the author's choice of characters and setting. The level of creativity is on point. It's a story I would recommend to anyone at any time. A very epic story "

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