Very Interesting read

"Your storyline is very unique, unlike anything I have read, and kept me hooked until the end! The cliffhangers were a huge part as to what kept me reading into the next chapter. Your writing was imaginative, helping to create vivid pictures, especially when the characters used their powers. Each person had a personal backstory providing a realistic atmosphere; there is a great level of imagination. I found a few grammatical errors, e.g. he was used instead of she, and vice versa, but it was quite easy to understand which term you were referring to. At first, it was difficult to follow the characters at times, as there are so many, mainly because I am not a fan of BTS. The distinctive traits between each character were beautifully and creatively written; each person had their own set of unique traits and flaws."