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What is your opinion?

Brother

"No dislikes. My best friend. Not to many errors. "

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Beautiful work

"Beautiful love story. "

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My Husband's Brother

"I like....I really like! More please...more!!!"

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Yes

"Well, the book , over all is interesting. The only issue here is the grammar. Otherwise this is a good read ! "

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My husband’s brother

"Love it so far"

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My husbands brother

"I hate all the swear words and the way the author doesn't describe how the characters look"

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My husband's brother

"Almost everything is good just that on some parts the writer would be confused and put he instead of she and the opposite but it's not that much of an issue and I would recommend it to Tissie...I made the ratings because I'm satisfied with how the writer took time to write it "

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Kim

"It's fun i loved it so much"

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My husband’s brother

"Loved the story! Can’t wait for more updates ✨✨✨"

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Job well done

"I love the story so much I just wish he could be a bit nicer and I would definitely recommend for people over 16 and for people who like this kind of love , hate romance "

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Interesting storyline

"It’s a very interesting and nice story "

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Unlawful

"Described a new relalationship"

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Forbidden land

"It's an interesting story."

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A very interesting premise

"I really liked the book. But while reading it, I kept wondering if the author was a native English speaker. Why? There was continual confusion (for me) between who they were referring to. For example, they mention a woman when they are swimming but to what end? And the fluctuations between Lorelei, Lincoln throughout the book mixing them up when it was clear who it was. I would ask that the author have someone else review the writing with a critical lens for edits. It will make the reader enjoy this book even more."

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Loved it

"Even though there were small grammar mistakes and minor plot errors, the story itself is truly beautiful. The depth of the characters, the emotional journey, and the overall message make it a compelling read. "

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Lustful island

"Your writing was good. Good sexual tension. Expected more of wild sexual events in that lonely Island. But just a single incident of a couple making love in open ... Hoped to see Lincoln and Lorelei had such fun actions in open "

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My Husband's Brother

"Would recommend it to friends "

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Interesting story

"Story is getting interesting. "

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Add Pictures to make it spicier

"I felt like the author could have included some pictures of the characters of the story and some pictures of seems in the story..to make it more spicy"

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Star

"Seems like there's a missing part of the story so I want keep on reading"

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