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until death do us reunite

"Is this your first story? well great first writing. It's more subtle than the others I have read, but a promise is a promise. from comments, i thank you for sharing. have learned that this one is an insert from another story. i have yet to read grave digger, but look forward to reading it. you have great writing skills and hope you continue for many more."

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Wow

"such a great story, nice idea!! "

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amazing as always<33

"i love your stories so much! i didn't realize this story was in another story until i reread this one..and then it dawned to me. Please keep up the good work, and maybe make more new stories perhaps?<3 because they are amazing!"

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Amazing as usual...

"This rework made the older story much more fun to read, since it wasn't overly detailed and too slow paced. I Don't read many short stories but the work of this author always intrigues me for more. Flawless grammar as far as my sleepy mind could detect."

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