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What is your opinion?
Almost Broken Angel
"Need to speed up the story line. Very interesting, good ploy and exciting "
Engaging story
"Could use better proofreading/editing. Otherwise, this is an entertaining story."
That's it?
"I hate when you guys do this. This is going to be an amazing story and it just feels wrong that you stopped it where you did"
Powerful
"It’s so divinely human and really puts into perspective the power of love as well as the grippings of suffering. Please keep writing! This really made an impact on me and the way I perceive myself and the world. I really hope you continue to share the beauty and darkness inside of you."
Plot
"Moving quickly in the beginning."
