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BEHIND THE MOUNTAIN

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Summary

James who is from a poor family tries his best to become a better person, but he has to risk his talent in exchange πŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’ŽπŸ’Ž

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

A Broken Mind

It was a snowy day as usual during the winter period in GreenLand James is seen singing in the cold white snow as drops of tears touch the snow making it to melt. He forms snow balls and throw them against the fence

JAMES: (mutters to himself) I really wish I could make something out of my talent. Anyways hopes still high I'll do better.......imagine me performing in front of a thousand.....(stops to listen to someone calling his name)

Stella, James mom calls out for the third time to James

STELLA: James!! Where are you?(walks to the back of the house, seeing James, she runs towards him) what's the problem, are you still having those mood swings??

JAMES: You may call them mood swings but they're just the truth, I need you to invest in my talent, it isn't muscular to ask from a mother?....

STELLA: You really think I don't want to invest in it? Look, James, you have six other siblings and you seem to not realize that it is a parent's duty to take care of all her children.....you....should really try understanding

JAMES: I'll say it again and it'll be the last time.......if you don't invest in me I'll leave

STELLA: (chuckles) you really think you can survive the trials of life without me?.....Look James, we are your family and you can't leave us, we'll get there together, and.....

JAMES: (cuts in) Get where together, where, you really don't understand (Leaves in anger)

STELLA: (chuckles) You really have guts..

James violently opens the front door barging in, he goes straight to his room and slams the door. He comes out again with a travelling box and a bag, he picks up his phone from the sitting room's table, just about then his mom dashes in seeing him she stops in shock, starring at him angrily, she approaches him and slaps him so hard that his face turns red

STELLA: what the fuck do you think you're doing!!!!!

JAMES: Fuck you and your family!! I'm gone (he pushes Stella and moves out)

STELLA: You motherfucker!!! Let's see if you'll survive out there!

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PART 2: A NEW HOME

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Good job boss

4 years
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please update this one

4 years

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