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Very Different. Perfect for my taste.

"I don't think I've read many stories on this platform but from every story that I've read till now, this stands out. I liked the pacing and the fantasy elements are really good. It's still ongoing so I'm expecting too much from the later episodes - such as the character development of Charlie. And although it was just one (or half) chapter with the perspective of Andrew Clarke, it was damn cool. His persona, the scenes, the time travelling thing, everything seemed too good. And talking about perspective, the perspective switch thing the author has done in this book, it's impressive how he pulled out every character differently. I could literally distinguish who the character was just by their narration, for example, Andrew had that cold and old style in his voice while Ava's character displayed trauma, and I could naturally get the soft hearted vibe from Robert Solace. But above all, the scenes, the suspense, and the way the author has pulled it off is brilliant. But like every story, I could see some flaws too. Personally, Charlie's character didn't stand out much from a typical hero, but like I said earlier - it's ongoing so my mind could change about him. And even though, the writing is good, more clarity is somewhat still needed. Like some backstory in the upcoming episodes. Overall, I'm glad I found this story here. Mind-blowing efforts. Thumbs up for AlenVerse from my side 👍and waiting excitedly on future updates!"

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