What is your opinion?
Falling twice
"I fall in love with this book. I just can't get enough of lamelia. Errr... I hope the author would publish a book 2. Please. "
Falling Twice
"I hope this isn’t the end of the story, I really enjoyed it. I feel like there’s so much more to be told about her and Marcus. I’m glad she’s not with Lucas."
Needs Development
"I think the overall feel of this book is similar to a fanfiction - I used to write fanfic and so I can recognize it usually when I see it. I think the plot of the book is nice, but it's lacking a bit of flair - what separates this from other romance novels with the same plot? I think it certainly follows tried and true tropes, which is good and makes it engaging, but you could use something extra to really set it apart. The writing style is a little rough, there is more telling than showing which is something that needs to be worked on. I think the dialogue is a little strange and doesn't sound natural or realistic at all. What guy is just going to go up to some random girl and start sputtering off cheesy pickup lines? That just doesn't happen and takes away from any realism the book could have. There are also quite a few grammatical issues, but mostly punctuation. Overall, I think the storyline is okay, maybe a little basic, but it's engaging and the characters are ones you can root for, but the style of the writing needs some work. Good luck and keep it up!"
