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Her Saving Grace

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Summary

When Chloe makes the hardest decision of her life. will it be the right one or will she just be another victim buried 6 feet under?

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Beginning of the End

It was a cool quiet night in the middle of summer when Chloe's boyfriend Mike barged into their house drunk at 9:00 pm. "I told you bitch, that if I sensed a hint of deception, I was gonna rip you into pieces!" Chloe looked at him scared and confused. "What the fuck are you talking about? I didn't do anything. I went to the bar and did payroll that is it!"

Mike grabbed her by the hair and slammed her against the wall. "I don't believe your lying ass! What are these marks from then, huh?" Mike would come home drunk or high and rape Chloe every chance he got. He would be so out of it, that he wouldn't be able to control how rough he got with her. "They're from you! You have no idea how bad you hurt me! I swear I would never cheat on you!"

Mike grabbed her by the hair as he threw her on the bed with him on top of her. "Now you're gonna let me fuck that tight little ass of yours. Do you understand me?" Chloe began to sob, as he held her down with one hand. "Please baby, anywhere but there, I beg you! Please don't do this to me!"

Mike slapped her so hard across the face, her eye swelled shut automatically. "See you are a fucking disgrace! No other man will ever want you, you are so fucking ugly!" With that he flipped her over onto her stomach and shoved himself inside of her. "Ahh stop, it hurts!"

She cried as she felt blood underneath her. "Oh yeah baby, your ass is so tight!" Chloe continued to cry, as he thrusted in and out of her as fast as he could.

Chloe gripped the sheets, as she screamed. "Fuck you, you son of a bitch!" As soon as he was done, Mike hit her in the back of the head with his gun and knocked her out cold. "Mmm baby, talk dirty to me!" He began to chuckle. "oh that is right, you can't."

He bent down and spit on her, as he grabbed his knife and carved his name onto her breast. "Now nobody will ever want you. you are mine, bitch till death do us part." With that he got dressed and left to go find another bar.

The next morning, Chloe got up and out of bed, sore from head to toe, as she groaned making her way to the bathroom. When she looked herself in the mirror and began to sob. "What did I do to deserve this!" Chloe wiped her tears and turned to start the shower.

As soon as she was about to get in her phone beeped with a text. "Hey beautiful, you okay?" It was her best friend Rose. "Yeah, I am fine why do you ask?" Rose texted back. "Well Mike came in with marks all over and I just wanted to make sure you were okay." Chloe rolled her eyes. "We just had really rough sex, that's all."

Chloe lied to her best friend of 15 years, but couldn't tell her what really happened. Mike would kill both of them. "So are you on your way in?" Chloe sighed. "No, I'm taking a quick shower and then I will be there okay?" Rose responded back. "Okay, I love you."

Chloe put her phone on the sink and stripped down, as she stepped into the shower. As soon as the water hit her, it had blood running through it. "I don't deserve this! I deserve to be treated a hell of a lot better!"

As Chloe let the water run down her body, she thought of a plan, and hopefully it would work. "This has to work, or I am a dead woman walking." About 15 minutes later, she got out of the shower and got dressed. "God please help me though this. I can't do this without you."

At Rosary Bar and Strip club, Mike was in his office trying to find new women to perform on weekends, when he heard a knock on the door. "It's open!" The Vice President Thorn walked in as he spoke to him. "What's up Thorn?" Thorn walked in and sat down across from Mike. "What's up brother? You look a little rough. You and Chloe get into a fight or something?"

Mike Sighed as he took a swig of his whiskey and began to speak. "Man it's getting bad. The drugs, alcohol, fucking women." Mike grabbed the bottle and threw it against the wall, as it shattered. "You need help, or your are gonna die at a young age brother."

Mike shook his head. "I'm already gone, and there ain't no changing my ways either." Thorn got up and looked at him. "I pray God has mercy on your soul." With that Thorn left his office and headed back to work. "Fuck everyone I don't care anymore." Mike said to himself, as he went in his desk and snorted a line of cocaine.

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