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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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oneshot

"this is a new writer that's not quite caught on, but she is trying. one shots are meant to be short, but, packed with an overload of action and information. she is still lacking in that department, but I believe she can make great improvements with the studying of her own work. spend more time 'feeling' her words. needs to remember to proofread before publishing. thank you for sharing."

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