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Loved this

"I loved the story.. plot.. and characters. Highly recommend. The grammar and some sentence structure could use some fixing, which would make this work flow and be an amazing book"

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Luna Abigail

"Excellent…. It’s a great read "

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Fleur100 Luna Abigail

"Enjoying this story so far. Looking to the rest of it. "

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Luna Abigail

"This is the type of romance I like. It tends to not follow the standard pattern"

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It is a good read. Moves the story along well . Sometimes it is hard to keep the characters straight.

"Good story . Flowed well sometimes continuity gets lost from chapter to chapter. Overall a good read."

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Great!

"Great plot and story. Still some grammar and punctuation issues, But still a good book!"

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Luna Abagail

"Loved ittt!!!! Couldnt stop reading til the end!!! Is there a second part.???"

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His Luna Abigail

"I found this book on Facebook, I read the first chapter and got hooked, there are quite a few wrong words used in place of something close. Also a few missteps in punctuation and grammar. But overall it is quite the enjoyable read. I would also caution the author not to give away major plot points only to go back over them from another point of view. Specifically the Narine storyline of her jumping into the portal and being cloaked, it would have been far better to have had an unknown pov going on leading to her capture instead of telling over her capture briefly then going back over it in detail. "

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Firemate of a dragon

"Good book I love the romances and the friendships in it is there a second book I can read "

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Yaneth

"Loved this book. Funny, loved the interaction between the couples. Will there be a sequel?"

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Great

"Love,love,love what a wonderful story, fresh and readable. Only grumble, work need to be proof read before publishing, a few words not in correct place and spellings."

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Great book

"Great book "

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Love it..

"I love how they focus on the main people but I feel they left out a few people after the story start working... I hope there other side story's to go with this."

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Luna abigail

"I loved everything about this book"

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Great story

"Great story. Needs editing, mainly with words that sound the same but have totally different meanings. Like using the word hear (to hear sound) instead of here (she is here)"

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Luna Abigail

"I really enjoy reading this book I've shared it with my friends and family "

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Luna Abigail

"Loved this ❤️ 💖 "

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Luna Abigail second chance

"Love this book, I read it over and over just for entertainment "

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Luna Abigail

"This is the best book not over written , I hope there a book 2 "

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Second book?

"This book kept me riveted. My only problem is grammar and spelling. The use of plurals and singulars is switched. I'm sure it was unintended. The storyline was great, but it left me hanging. Well done! Is there a book 2?"

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