Inkitt
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The Contest

"This book was a lot of fun to read! I really enjoyed the author's writing style too. "

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Too Good

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An Enjoyable Story!

"I found this story to be a great blend of humor and fantasy, taking elements of the modern world and mixing them with fiction and magic. The inclusion of the contest and Princess Eemay were wonderful to see, and I loved seeing the story from her point of view. I think it added more humor and charm to the story overall. Characters like Scott and Hugh were wonderful additions as well, and I enjoyed seeing how things played out in the story. However, I feel that there are many places where the author can make us feel like the reader is more in the story to make it even better than it already is, places where subplots can possibly added to dive more into the characters, and ways to improve some of the grammar. It has great potential to it and I can't wait to see how the author is able to make the audience laugh once more. :) **I have some suggestions and comments for the author in the comments. :)"

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