Honest and enjoyable read

"Hey I loved how honest you were. I think that honesty makes for the best writing and stories. I loved the progression that led up to the diagnosis as I wasn't expecting it. For criticisms, I personally wanted to see more detail on the feelings involved. I think that for a story that is so reflective, there should be more to when describing a feeling so the reader knows how that feeling truly felt. These are life changing moments and I wanted to see metaphors and similes regarding how the embarrassment, or shock actually felt using word magic. Keep up the good work!"