Great idea! Bad execution.

"I really enjoyed the idea of the story, it is very unique and captivating. I wish there was some more background info given in the story about the world they live in and events that occur. But what ruined this for me is that it is wrote in the style of a script. It's not that it was hard to read or understand, but it was uncomfortable. I will say though that this would make a great young adult cartoon series with a few tweaks, defiantly something i would want to watch as well though."