COMPULSIVE
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COMPULSIVE

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Summary

The first Derrick Olin novel originally published in 2007. Excerpt from Tragic City, the latest novel in the series coming in 2023... Bridgett Lemons was a young woman on the verge of realizing all of her dreams. In just a few short months she would be on the path to the life she had always wanted. But when an abusive Ex comes back into her life and threatens to destroy everything she’s worked so hard for, Bridgett has no place to turn. Or maybe just one. Derrick Olin, at one time a top Air Force antiterrorism operative, now a freelance professional bodyguard. He agrees to take on Bridgett’s case and soon finds himself confronting an unbalanced combat vet obsessed with his client and seemingly bent on self-annihilation. Complicating matters further, there’s someone even more dangerous stalking the Ex. Someone who wants to make sure that the dark secrets torturing the young soldier’s twisted mind stay buried forever! And if Bridgett and Derrick get in the way, they’ll bury them too. If they can!

Status
Complete
Chapters
50
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

ENDGAME

ENDGAME

Leigh looked at me and grinned.

The waitress brought our drinks and was in the process of setting them on the table in front of each of us when suddenly I glanced up toward the entrance, and there he stood, dressed just as he had been the last time I saw him. How in the hell did he keep getting into places looking and smelling like that?

Stanley Toccata.

His arms were down by his sides and his hands back behind his legs and I couldn’t tell if he had anything in them. He was wearing a baggy ACU[6] jacket that looked like it was about to fall apart, but it could conceal an entire arsenal of small arms, or an explosives belt for that matter. Sometimes having a fertile imagination was not such a good thing.

Some of the students seated at other tables near the front started to notice him, more like smelled him at first, and they reacted predictably. Then Bridgett turned and all the color drained from her face.

“Stanley!” she said in an urgent and shrill voice, recoiling.

Leigh turned to look and Charmane looked back over her shoulder…

Let Stellen Qxz know what you thought about this chapter!

Evelyn_246
Evelyn_246

Hi Jenna K.,

I just finished reading your story Wolf Bound and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.

I really loved the scene in Chapter 4 where Mia embraces her wolf heritage during the moonlit ceremony the raw emotion and vivid descriptions would be incredible to portray visually. It’s ideal for a comic because the transformation and spiritual connection you described would make for stunning, dynamic panels. I also really enjoyed the tense standoff between Mia and the rival alpha in Chapter 7  the build-up of conflict and the charged energy between them would translate perfectly into dramatic artwork.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.

You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username - Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username - Eve_verse) so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

a year

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