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Little Miss perfect Little Miss perfect

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Summary

Lily is a girl who her parents treat her like a outsider. She as a big sister Chloe there parents just adore. She swore to a life of crime ,and make her parents feel bad.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

My whole life I have tried never to make mistakes. Just to impress my parents. But my parents are so obsessed with my elder sister Chloe. She is just little Miss perfect . well she as it all She is pretty smart popular

Once she got an A, she rubbed it in my face literally. Mom and Dad were so happy for there little princess.

Mom said, ''Lily can't you be more like your sister?''

Hold up, I literally got an A- .I got mad and ran to my room.

I could hear Dad mom and Chloe go out they forgot me. I cried my heart out; you could bath in my tears.

I angrily rode my bike to my best friend Amelia cause she cheered me up.

''Forget about them,'' Amelia said trying to cheer me up.

''Why do they always do this to me? It's like I am adopted,'' I said tearfully.

I checked the time it was 8 o clock. I hopped on my bicycle and rode home. Luckily my parents weren't home yet.

I took a shower and then slept I could hear my parents come

I cried myself to sleep.

The next week was my birthday. But my parents said that it would be Chloe's pre birthday

They always had to make me feel hate, anger, and sadness.

My parents made me work Chloe's pre-birthday. As that witch enjoys her so called pre birthday.

Chloe's pre-birthday party worked out well for. Her and her stupid friends and family. Always bullied me and called me breakfast girl. But Leon was different from the others, I actually had a crush on him since forever, but Chloe found out and she tried to make him her boyfriend, and it worked.

During her pre birthday I puted some substance that makes you fart. Well, the medicine worked perfectly, Chloe was so embarrassed that she ran of to her room and locked her self in there.


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