What is your opinion?
I like how the story is developing, no unnecessary side stories of the characters that could distract from the main plot.
"I would recommend this book to my friends because it does have a pleasant story line that doesn’t need graphic or sex undertones."
The Wedding Planner
"Beautiful love story with great plot and storyline . I like the characters and the fact that your story is wholesome and family friendly . Keep writing and thanks for a good read "
Book
"A little confusing that the kid shows up at the end of the book. Where was she?"
The weading planer
"The best book ever. It got me to read again!!! I can not wait for your next book. :)"
It’s great
"Plot & story are good. Fast paced but much better than the dragging one"
The wedding planner
"That was a feel good book😍"
The wedding planner
"Very good. I turned a boo g eye to the errors as the storyline was very interesting. Love the conclusion. "
The wedding planner
"I very much like the book. Congratulations!"
The Wedding Planner
"I like this love story very much. It has different setting from the usual love stories. I would share this story to my friends! Pls write more great stories like this! "
Cross lovers
"The twist and turn"
A good read
"An overall beautiful story. I was already glued the minute I started the first chapter. The development is exceptional. But I found the ending a bit unrealistic-all friends ending up as a couple? Especially with Jasmine and Ash also hooking up. I also noticed contradicting ideas. It seemed like Kyle's father never loved Alexis and that his mother was the one who was always supportive, but then the last three chapters show him as more supportive than the mother. The same applies to Alexis and Jasmine. At first Alexis did not want to meet Jasmine, but then they are suddenly cool with each other on the last chapter? That was a bit off. Again, there were too many grammatical errors. Sometimes I found myself having to think about what you could have possibly wanted to say. Above all else, this was a great story and I would definitely recommend the book to my fellow fiction lovers. All the best with the book. cheers!"
Errors now and then...
"It's good but they're some errors in the grammar that appears now and then, but still good 👍 hope you'd have some editor or copy writer to help you deal with those. "
Nice
"Story plot is nice but could still be improved. There are some things that didn't add up."
The Wedding planner
"Nice story 🤗🌼..."
