Leatherbound

"It was a good start, the writer started with prologue of reminiscent among the clansmen and writer wrote it perfectly that the reader could feel the chivalry of the men. However, the part of telling the story of Skord's mother can be skipped as it altered the feeling of reader from chivalry of clansmen to widowhood. Then starting from the paragraph of "On the last day they culled...", the writer could have more discussion or exposition of Behan and Skord's climax, rather than explaining the environment between them. Thus increasing the readers' feeling of tense for the brotherhood story. Afterall, you have good explanatory style of writing the character's environment. "