Great job!

"Well, I just wanted to let you know your story is very well written. English is not my first language, so I had to check on a few words, but that could only mean your lexicon is very good. The plot is also incredible, and the raw reality of this world made it even better. Not that I'm a masochist, but it just resembles more our real life and I like it. Keep up with the hard work! You're doing amazing."