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Loved it

"I loved the way the story tied together with all the previous books, the character development how the battle sense were full of detail and the details of the surroundings in the book. the extra care to show the different side of each character and even how she wrapped the book still living you wanting more, but thankful for the details of the future. I would so recommend this book to anyone who loves family friendship the ties of love the errors of wrongful thinking and the results of it. How a hard life can prepare you for great things. "

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"I love the series So interesting "

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Book 6

"What a journey that is by reading the whole series! The plot are very interesting, although there are few gramatical error, it does not prevent readers to understand the flow and meaning of the story!"

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Destiny awaits

"Here is the end... What a journey! I have really love this 6 books. For this review I will begin by a few criticims. There is a few chapters witch resume the story. I think it's too long. I would prefer more time with characters interaction. The Death of a villain is really anticlimatic. I was really frustated by this. There is, again, some missing words or mispelled names here and there. For the good things : The story come very well to the climax. The plot is, as always, good and there is some good surprises coming along the book. I think this story, with some polish, is worth to be publish. Now, that it's all finish, I will miss this characters... until I read this books again (I have read the books 1 to 5 twice already!) Dears Inkitt users, if you have not read this story, please give it a try. I'm sure you will love this 6 books. "

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It's good but...

"It really would have been aided by having an editor or a second read by the author for proofing. a lot of missing words, typos, and errors. On the story front, I don't have many issues. Really the only issue I can see is that the protagonist throughout the entire series is often treated like they are 8-10 years olf by those around her. When you are a teenager, you would rapidly become frustrated with that situation and push against that actively. As a mother of two 15 year olds, I see that daily. "

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