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😊😊😊
"What a surprising story. I’ve enjoyed reading so far! Waiting to see whats in store for the two main characters. "
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Smer Rayne
"Nice Stoey....love it... "
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Enlightening Story
"This is very enlightening... Exactly what i need right now. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story. You’re absolutely an amazing writer with a gift to touch the hearts of your readers. "
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Summer Rayne
"I have got to say this is an AMAZING book! The way you captured the beauty of having Jesus Christ as their Lord and savior thru every action and choice they made. The direct bible verses and prayer before everything they did has made this my favorite book by far. The beauty and love that was represented was so wonderful and heartfelt that I myself felt the amazing wonders of our Lord Jesus Christ. May God bless you and continue to work thru any and all amazing books you may write❤💖💖Thank you🤗"
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Summer Rayne
"This book drew me closer to the Lord. I will be praying more for the desires of my heart and for all decisions. I thoroughly enjoyed this book."
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Nice read
"Good content. Faithful and loving story"
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2 chapters read
Disappointed
"I was very excited about reading this story but as I kept going it seems like all she talks about is God and Chad which really has nothing to do with the plot. Now I'm not saying you can't talk about God but it's excessive, every chapter, sentence, thought is about God. The first few chapters talking about Chad which adds nothing to the story."
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6 chapters read
Disappointed
"Every part of the beginning story is centered around a man whos not important (Chad) and God both of which do NOTHING to add to the plot. I cant even finish the book bc its so slowly progressed and circles back to the same issue with 2 men who again have no REAL need to even be mentioned. Mentioning God every paragraph takes away from what COULD be a good book. And by chapter 2 i was wondering if the main character does anything for herself or follows the magic rule of "Wait to hear from God" while the author never actually gives a God a real job to do to help further the character or plot. Theres nothing wrong with Creating a story with a Christian character, or a character who has a backstory that affects them. There is, in my opinion, something wrong with creating a story with a character whos entire personality is following God and not allowing them to progress either in person or in plot. "
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