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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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The alpha moon

"Wow...this was a really great story and can't wait to read the next one."

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The Alpha Moon

"Lovely read, enjoyed the story, onto read the 2nd book straight away"

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The Alpha’s Moon

"I was really enjoying this book and so the rest of the story being taken from my viewing list is disconcerting, to say the least!!!!"

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Cool

"This is a nice title book , if you like short books, you’ll love it "

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The Alpha Moon

"I enjoyed this book. Good plot and good characters. There were grammatical errors like mixing up he and she ,daughter and son but didn't detract from the story very much."

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The Alpha Moon

"I loved the story very well written I hope you will continue to write more stories "

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Sweet

"Nice short but sweet story "

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Great work!

"I really liked the storyline and the characters. I love the Pov's of different characters. It was fun reading the story."

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Lovely book

"Very cute read. Well written."

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Princess awaiting to be crowned

"The plots r a bit slow and the writer needs to have less grammatical errors . I recommend it to all werewolves lovers"

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