Inkitt
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The black dragons

"Great story despite all the typos. I recommend reading it"

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Evil

"This girl can’t catch a break "

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Lacking what makes a story come alive

"Definately lacking what makes a story come alive. Descriptions, emotions, thoughts...."

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