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Excellent!

"The writing is so rich and descriptive, it's almost like reading poetry at times. You can really immerse yourself in what's going on. Personally, I usually don't love descriptions of setting because I can find it to be boring, but the way you write it makes it engaging. The characters are interesting and I like that there are multiple POVS. This is just nitpicking, but I'd almost rather the chapters have actual titles and then the POV switches be in the chapters themselves (like in bold or something) - but that's just me. The style as I said is great and there are very little if any grammatical errors that I noticed. There are some punctuation errors with the quotation marks that I noticed, but nothing you wouldn't catch in a proof read or two. The plot itself is interesting and stands apart from other werewolf like stories tremendously, which is great. I can tell you spent a lot of time planning/researching for writing this story, which always makes the final product so much better. Overall, amazing work and keep it up!"

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An absolute must read

"Super cool story! Very exciting so far! I like the writing style incredibly!"

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