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Fantastic Read

"Amazing book absolutely loved the writing style!"

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The Sharpiest Lies

"Love this story! The bantering dialogues are fun and the spicy hot scenes! Good job! Keep writing! Thank you so much for sharing! ❤️❤️❤️"

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An immersive, keep you on your toes story

"I have never read a book in second person. I have to admit, I was skeptical reading chapter one. I wasn't sure of the flow and visuals However, I got to chapter two and couldn't put it down. I loved the plot, twists and turns, the visuals and really loved the style. This author is skilled with being able to keep you engaged. It was nice reading something that didn't have redundant vocabulary. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing making it difficult to read and it is understandable with the author still growing and not being published... YET. If I had to make one suggestion, it would either reduce the intimate scenes or change what's happening. A few of them were the same and I would've loved to have read more of a variety, especially with the talent this author has for drawing the reader in. To the author: continue writing with YOUR style. Ignore the suggestions of replacing the "you" with "she" or "I". You are very gifted and the way you wrote this, makes this a captivating story. "

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Story

"I’m loving it. Want to read more "

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Loved it.

"Such a great story. I love stories of a trio. Great job."

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I don't like it but I loved it , thanks .

"I loved the story and will recommend it to a friend and the reason I choose the rating is because it deserves it."

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Perfection!

"OMG! OMG! OMG! Its the best book I have ever read since discovering this app. I loved everything about it. I'd watch it if it materialized into a movie. ❤😘"

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The sharpest lies

"Great book..but i just cant understand how she can love 2 men..anyways..it was a great read..n sex was great!!"

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Little bit of everything

"You get the spice, the romance, action, drama, comedy. You got it all. Loved it and the characters "

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Brilliantly written

"I must say I was at first sceptical of this book but the author had me captured from the first chapter. It had a little of everything. Well done brilliant book. "

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Awesome novel

"I like the plot and idea of the novel it’s very good and so spicy I highly recommend this because this is plot this kind of relationship i was looking in novel so all over its so good "

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Engaged in relationships

"I like the characters , especially dynamic Jamie "

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The Sharpest Lies

"Sizzling hot! Love the chemistry with Julien and build up and sensitive artistic side of Jamie. Would love to see the story continue or even an epilogue to see the assertive side of the female lead at Anderson, maybe a pregnancy or even post a child with Jamie added to the mix. A few grammatical error but nothing that warranted less stars."

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Steamy, compelling story

"So far this story is a perfect mix of spicy steamy goodness with a plot and cast of characters to truly get invested in. I can't wait to read more. There are a few technical errors here and there, but they don't distract from the story in any way. "

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The Sharpest Lies

" I loved this story, the plot and the characters. This should be very interesting when father and son find out they are sleeping with the same girl. I hope she drops the horrible boyfriend and choose the father. Great writing author. "

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Mmmmmm

"Really enjoying this read so far. Looking forward to reading more as it updates."

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Interesting so far!

"I am enjoying it, not usually a fan a this perspective of writing style but author pulls it off. Looking forward to more updates!"

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Mr punchy

"Very good so far "

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