Inkitt
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Gripping storyline

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well written

"Overall, the book was well-written. It was comprehensive, comprehendible, contained good grammar and vocabulary, and had a smooth flow between texts. I don't see myself offering any changes, however, I would offer some criticism: While I do think this book deserves the response I have given it, I found myself confused between characters while reading, often confusing one for the other. I know from experience that writing a book is an arduous task -- It requires hard work, patience, and determination. It takes a second for me to reconsider and falter while writing any passage of my own, which does make it quite hard to continue further. There are many factors which may cause the author of a book to hesitate in publishing, however, if you can get over this deviation, then I truly believe any piece of text you write will be written with confidence and assurance. Again, I am offering constructive criticism. Do not take this as an insult, because every aspiring writer imagines differently than the other. I look forward to reading more of your pieces. "

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