What is your opinion?
It was amazing and interesting but I don't like the ending.
"The ending was terrible "
Odd
"The first few chapters are really clumsy and I nearly bailed. I stuck with it, after all it's not that long and I'm a fast reader. The MCs were half drawn at first with both characters no more than ciphers. I left a comment about a sentence being repeated which was sufficiently surreal that I wondered if I was reading a very different kind of story. After all, our intial MC, Girl A (I can't remember their names) has a bust up with her boyfriend and then sets off to drive around the country to perform a Wiccan ritual? Then she picks up girl B for what reason exactly? Girl B's personality is borderline schizophrenic to start with and if I'd been Girl A we'd have parted company pretty quickly. Then there's Girl B's churchy stuff. I have to take that on trust because Ihave no experience with it. It was very jumbled. However, around the halfway point it starts to get much stronger, almost as if the author wrote it backwards, having had the final scenes fleshed out in her head and then having to come up with a way to arrive at them. I think I've come across a least a section of it before, likely on Literotica. "
