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What is your opinion?
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"I like the subject matter I thought it was well written characters are very believable. I gave her the five."
Just A Bit Of Work Other Besides That It's Amazing!
"Now I noticed just a few errors here and there though it's small ones; the thing that really caught my eye, though, was the description. You need to describe what they're doing, or perhaps even what they're wearing to add a bit more spice to things. I gave you some examples in your comments, and I feel like if you implement those this story would be AMAZING! On a scale from 1-10 I give this book a 7 due to the descriptions inside of it, but all in all, uwu is a pretty fun read!"
