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Love this version even more than the one on Galathea

"Wow it is even better here than in Galathea - wish i could read the rest, where it has not been altered."

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A gift for the general

"I read this on Galatea and loved it!! Will there be more books since it’s listed as a series? If so where can I read them"

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Beaux

"J'ai toujours aimé les histoires sciences fiction mais cette histoire est le meilleur. Les personnes sont déférents de ce je li est unique "

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A gift for the general

"J’adore cette nouvelle , je trouve qu il y a une bonne approche, on nous met progressivement dans l’ambiance et c est super ,je recommande ce livre"

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Loving this story so far!

"I have found myself absolutely loving these alien/sci-fi romance type books, so I immediately knew this would be right up my alley! I love the characters and the writing style used! Also I’m super excited to continue reading!"

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Update

"When will it be updated "

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A gift for the general

"This is brilliant! I absolutely love it."

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Amazing Story!!

"I absolutely love this story so far. The world building, the characters, how the characters interact with each other and how their inner dialogue plays out....all just lovely. Looking forward to reading the rest!!"

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Nice

"Thank you. "

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Good work

"I really enjoyed reading this and I hope the author updates soon. "

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Binge reading worthy

"I read all of the chapters in one sitting, there are some spelling errors and similar sounding words have been exchanged so I was unsure if that was due to a talk to text errors? Definitely wanted to keep reading so I was disappointed that the book just stopped. Thought the author did a great job at moving the reader through an explanation of how the girls came to be at the auction pens and what they experienced while waiting to be sold off. I appreciated that the General was a gentleman to the best of his ability and again I was disappointed that the story ended as they left the elevator the day after. "

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Nicely done setting a high standard

"I'm really enjoying this story so far it shows a lot of promise with its well developed characters and both clear & subtle plot developments evidencing advanced storing tell techniques."

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Fantastic details

"I saw the title & it caught my attention but I was not expecting this. Very different to anything I've ever read & I can't wait to read more"

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Tracey

"Yes I’ve been waiting for more chapters I love this story it really interesting can’t wait for more"

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Gift for the General

"Loved it"

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Great Story

"The story is compelling as it is captivating. Looking forward to how it unfolds. Interesting dynamics with the intergalactic twist."

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the title it has is very good

"1I liked everything, this book is very good 2to my friends 3I chose this assessment because the book is very well done"

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So far very original and an easy read

"Very original. An easy read. Descriptive and entertaining. "

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A Gift For The General

"The story quickly caught my attention. I was hooked in the first chapter. I’m looking forward to where this goes. I find myself checking every day for updates."

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A Gift for the General

"It getting too fantastic which means that I am beginning to lose interest simply because it is increasingly difficult to identify with the characters"

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