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The Girlfriend

"Loved the writing and the plot."

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The Girlfriend

"All in all this was a good very good short story in my opinion. It would be great if you made this into a longer story at some point in time. Thank you so much for writing this story. You are a wonderful author. The main characters we're great.😊❤️😊"

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The Girlfriend

"Another twisted tale from the warped, but lovely mind of Marsha. Having a dull day? Well pickup a short story from Marsha. This story is about the wife's friend from work. It is about crossed paths that gives everyone a bit of a surprise and just maybe a smile..."

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