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Good

"At the beginning of the book it was super confusing. It was not until a few chapters in, that I started being less confused. Now that I'm almost halfway through, the book is really good. I love the constant second guessing that I'm doing. Once I think I have the book figured out, it makes me second guess again and I'm back to not knowing."

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Wow

"Really good. Needs some editing for speech Grammer but very interesting book so far! "

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Dragon born

"This book was amazing it had a little bit of hogwarts I beaded in a great story "

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Dragon born

"Not at all what I was expecting. Fantastic story line...is there more? "

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Dragon born

"It is absolutely, without a doubt one of the best app books I have ever read"

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Dragonborn

"Great Harry Potteresque book with no ending. Has a lot of potential but I think it went away from the writer. Maybe there’s a sequel…"

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Dragon born

"So far it’s seems very good"

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Sleuthqueen

"Nice story but with too much unnecessary dialogue and mystery"

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Needs work but I loved it

"This book needs some work. Having two characters with the same name was confusing at times, even now I do not kniw if there were two or simply a mistake. I loved the book either way. I hope i get a chance to know what happens next. I would recomend editing this book, as it has great potential. "

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Needs Work

"Dialogue, sentence structure, and diction is all written as if by a twelve year old in a 7th grade literature class. Flat characters, stilted sentences, uninspired plot and awkward dialogue make this book a hard pass."

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