What is your opinion?
Falken angel mc: rebel and kelly
"That was great!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Rebel and kelly
"I love this book it's full of cool stories "
Fallen Angel MC: Rebel And Kelly
"Amazing story! Please keep on writing. "
Fallen angel mc rebel and kelly
"I really loved reading about all the different characters in this book. I want to hear more about them all. I want to know about what happens with the vampires later."
Confessed
"Had a hard time keeping everything in order."
Great Read
"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"
Very nice
"It was good to read your novel and it was mixed up 😔 but I did enjoy reading your novel 😀 you made lots of mistakes with your spelling 😔 but the storyline was amazing "
Good start
"Needs more and faster. It is a good start to the story."
Looking For More
"This book has a great storyline, and from my perspective has some timeliness issues that made it hard for me to stay focused. Don't mind multiple characters being lead in the book, but for me, there has to be a limit... too many characters and subplots take away from the enjoyment of the entire book. Yes, I will read another book from this author because the issues I had with this book maybe just in this book. "
Disappointed
"Punctuation and spelling are atrocious. Multiple spelling errors in every chapter. The jumping around from character to another is confusing; add in the time frame, and it makes this almost impossible to read. I lost count of the characters, who married who and the parents of children. Just because spell check says there are no misspelled words doesn't mean it's the correct word to use."
All Over The Place
"I do NOT recommend this book at all. It reads as if someone is just jotting down scrabbled memories of a dream. There are huge jumps in time, you can’t tell who is speaking, and in the middle it switches to a new storyline but with the same character names. My 9 year old could write a better story. Please have someone proofread and then edit stories before publishing them."
Follow your own plot not a mishmash of 10 or more plots
"1. Keep a record of characters names 2. Keep record of the plot 3. Stop writing multiple books and uploading chapters that dont make sense because that story line wasnt even in this book 4. "She thought as she sat in her rocking chair" is not proper grammer take away the " " as they are used when a person is talking not thinking or narating. For example "joe what are you doing over there?" Mother said. 5. I think ive counted a total of 10 different story lines in this book alone. 6. Dont upload a chapter until you have re-read and edited it"
