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"CRASHED AMONG THE STARS!"

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Summary

The BEST part of your life could be the WORST one. You just can't believe anything. This is the life of Enid in Adewhale who is never tired of facing new challenges.

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
4.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

1# HOPLESS

"Ring!,Ring!,Ring!" The bell rang. It was another evil day starting. Shoving every child towards the deadly breakfast rooms with something not even likely to be called a meal. After that just work,work,work!

As always with an empty stomach I was washing dishes. Wishing that this miserable life would end up. But as the sun stared at me with its cunning smile all the hopes dashed away from me leaving me in the hands of depression.

Just as all of us were working Miss Morantina's sharp voice made everyone alert and active at once. She was our madam in the orphanage and was very cruel. She made everyone work perfectly and could not bear any fun which was nonsense to her. She was a pretty greedy woman.

Well so Miss Morantina had come to ask everyone to be quick and wind up their work. "Enid Adewhale!Be quick. Don't you understand we are expecting visitors." 'Ohh! Yes mam sorry." I replied in a hurry. I knew like every week some people would come to adopt children and would directly go to the small babies area while we would just stand there in a line feeling completely ignored. Another call from Miss Morantina made me flee into my room. I wore my white and yellow skirt blouse, brushed my hair with smooth curls and got ready.












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yes lovely

4 years
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vist my story too power of dreams

4 years
author

Absolutely love the characters and I am amazed how much details you have put-in to describe the character it shows that you're a brilliant writer. You have used brilliant vocabulary keep it up and I AM WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!!!! already so proud of you baby girl 💟

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