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Maidens Love

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Summary

I wrote this poem for an English assignment. Its a Fable, so if I remember correctly its supposed to teach some sort of moral lesson. Its about a married woman who was always there for her husband and was an amazing wife, but her husband was having an affair and treats her horribly. She ends up unaliving herself and he then realizes what she really meant to him.

Genre
Poetry/Other
Author
shelly
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Maidens Love


There once was a maiden

Who was courted by one mistaken.

She was gracious and vivacious

But he was a snake, unfaithful, blind and mendacious.

They have been together

Supposed to be forever.

Except there was another

So the maiden, like a rabbit, was to suffer.

She always was sharing and caring

With her love who at night was never appearing.

It was to be through thick and thin

But it all came down to her skin.

For one night she layed in a pile of blood when

Her love came home and he found himself deep in a den.

He realized what he had lost

And had to pay for what it cost.

For now the man had learned

That he must also care for anothers world.




Thank you for reading! please let me know what you think.

-shelly


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