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awesome

"I say keep going the professor must die or be sent in front of the judge to confess to his crimes and serve a lifetime in prison. awesome story northeless"

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Has Potential

"It has potential, just a word of advice, look into expanding your descriptions as well as your dialogs. Try not to abuse the Caps Lock as well as punctuations. Normally, less is more. Other than that, you have something truly going on."

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