Customize readability
Aa

Trust is a Powerful Word

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

"AHH" "SKRR" "OW! " I say. What just happened?" I shout. No answer. "Hello?" Nothing. I look around. Shoot. Everyones dead. Or atleast unconscious. "Hello?" I hear someone say in a shaky voice. Their atleast a few rows down. I hurry over, assuming we just crashed. I look out the window and see im right. Were on an island. I recognize the woman. She was sitting next to me. Must have gotten flung backwards from the impact.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Hmph" I sighed. 'This 8 hour plane ride feels more like 18 hours.' I think to myself. I really dont want to go back to Nevada, its so boring there. I drift off.

"You want some Pepsi ma'am?" I bolt awake. Thank god its just the flight attendant, I have i huge fear of crashing.

"No thanks" I say. Im going to try and go back to sleep.

"AHH" "SKRR" "OW! " I say. What just happened?" I shout. No answer. "Hello?" Nothing. I look around. Shoot. Everyones dead. Or atleast unconscious. "Hello?" I hear someone say in a shaky voice. Their atleast a few rows down. I hurry over, assuming we just crashed. I look out the window and see im right. Were on an island. I recognize the woman. She was sitting next to me. Must have gotten flung backwards from the impact.


Im still in shock, not surprising considering one of my biggest fears is crashing. The woman doesnt look seriously hurt, just still in shock. That makes two of us. She starts to recover and so do I. Slowly. After we both seem to be getting back to normal, she asks "What's your name?" "Katie, what about you?" I say. "I love that name! Mines Kristen." "Cool" I say. We seem about the same age, but it's still rude to ask so i try small questions to lead there. "So um, what uh, what school do you go to?" I say, expecting high school or college. "Pathaway High School, home of the knights."


Yes! Were in the same age range! I think to myself. "You?" She says. "Ranger High School, home of the coyotes." "Are you a junior, sophomore, senior, what?" "Sophomore." I say. "Same!" She says. "Cool"

I can feel myself getting hungry. "Lets go check for snacks." I say.

"Alright" They're all crushed from impact. It really only damaged the front of the plane, the back just felt it. "We should probably get out" She says. "Yeah"


We're on an island, like a tropical island. Its pretty big. A wave comes in. She runs away. "You scared of the water?" I say. "Uhh, yeah?" She says nervously. "Okay then," I say. A few long, long months went by. We ate meat over a fire, and ate and drank coconuts. We actually became very good friends, like best friends.

Then one day, "Hey! Come on!" I say heading into the water for a swim. "No thanks." She says. "Come on! You have to get over yours fears!" I jump into the water. "See! Its fine Kristen." 'No.' She says. I splash water on her as a joke. 'No!!" She says in a sluggish voice. She falls to the ground. I hear something. Something like when you get water on a piece of an electric device.


I take a look. "Holy cow!" She was a robot? I say to myself I take a look at the the technology. None of its really damaged. Just 'Kristen' Isnt able to speak/move/anything. I take a closer look at the technology. What?! Its been collecting information and pictures of me!? Wait. I look at a recorded video of me. But theres another person in the background. And its not Kristen.



Let Octopus know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

1

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

2

Compelling Plot

Great Character

1

Great Character

Strong Dialog

1

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Learning to Love

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
The zatorian

Use8eR2: A very good story and interesting characters, making it really fun to read. I love all the plot twists and the way the setting is described; it feels like I'm in a movie. Amazing!

Read Now
The Abandoned Alpha

Lynn Phoenix: Great storyline. I'm praying it's complete since the last update was last year.

Read Now
Wildes Echo 1 - MEA

Miriam: Ich finde deine Bücher einfach Klasse! Von der ersten bis zur letzten Zeile spannend und gefühlvoll geschrieben

Read Now
Stranded on an Island with Mr. CEO

Genaydre: Une belle histoire comme on les aime/ a beautifull story like we love.

Read Now
One Way To Live Is To Make A Zombie Fall For You

Emily012: Fiona’s fear and resilience shine brilliantly.

Read Now
Mein Alpha, sein Rudel und seine erwählte Luna (A Chosen Soulmate Story)

Anita: Der Roman ist gut geschrieben. Grammatikalisch nicht immer stimmig und häufig werden nicht passende Wörter verwendet. Der Schreibstil ist in Ordnung. Interessant genug, dass ich die meisten Teile wirklich gelesen habe, nicht nur überflogen.

Read Now
Cinderella in Chucks

LeonieTamina: Ein Buch von Frau für Frau, aber Frau würde sich manchmal wünschen dass auch Männer so etwas lesen würden. Die könnten ja was lernen *grins*

Read Now
The First She (Ezron #1) - 2026 Rewrite

PenPrincess: I loved everything about this book! All the twists and turns! All the advancements made where there are! Obviously being vague so I don’t accidentally reveal anything ! it’s MUST read!! Loved the plot development hehe 😉

Read Now