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What is your opinion?
Sex
"Good plot excellent writing and presting or cracters"
Role play
"That was 🔥 and spicy. "
Flawed but sexy prose
"This book needs editing. I don’t like its blunt (blah word choices) and repetitive writing style, but its scenarios were very hot. The author certainly knows how to create steamy scenes, but some prose felt glossed over and would’ve benefitted from a little more poetry. It felt less immersive and sounded more like some guy was trying to impress me with “his feats”. Recommendation: show; don’t just tell. But, please, keep doing it. I’d like to read more of this couple’s adventures…especially after that last one (which needs to be better wrapped up but was still incredibly hot)."
