What is your opinion?
Inked desire
"I liked the plot. I would recommend it to my friend. I rated it according to my understanding."
Inked desires
"This is a good book . A little emotional "
What you want to
"I love the book. I do have a problem with having to do a review and post and share before even getting to the end of book. You already make us share every other chapter so if you want to find out if your story or book is being rated truthfully then do this stuff at the last chapter."
Whatever you want it to be
"I love this story . There is not one single thing that I do not like about this storyline or the author."
Tat
"So far I am enjoying the book. I don't usually read books like this but I find that I am intrigued."
Dam
"Reminds me so much of my ex n myself. Our lively little role play moments. God why did he have to go to jail :("
Romance novel
"Good story…. Very intriguing. "
Tracey
"They both need some healing and they need to talk to each about how they feel"
Inked desires
"I like the build up to character development I wish Hades had a little more info about him as his hot and cold is just strange though right now at this point "
Inked desires
"I am totally loving this story! Can't wait until Hades reveals what happened with the woman Milla reminds him of. I need more of this story"
Will do anything for my first love.
"I love the story in its entirety so far. Would recommend it to persons who like these type of stories."
The story is captivating, well told , characters nicely written. It might not be for everyone though, the fact that she constantly gets raped and just excepts it is painful to swallow. But I look forward to reading the rest of the story and I'm hoping she fights back or the ass hats get what they deserve.
"The story is definitely not for everyone. I am how ever enjoying it so far, the story line is good, characters are written well. It is how ever painful how she is constantly getting raped and just excepting it. I'm hoping she eventually fights back or they get their dues, as far as hades goes I'm still not sure I like him."
Good storyline
"I am enjoying the story so far. I definitely want to read further. The first chapter was a good opening chapter and set the tone, for the story so far."
Inked
"The most distracting thing in this story so far is all the exclamation marks after every single spoken sentence. There are even exclamations when something is said to be muttered. Those are need to be reevaluated. There’s also something lost in translation about Milla and her character. I think it’s all the descriptors in the first chapter that throw it off. Maybe consider not trying to explain so much and use more internal dialogue and let the reader come to conclusions?"
Too many exclamation marks.
"Good book but it is hard to get over the fact that most sentences have exclamation marks when they need periods. "
Good work and good story line . Wish the author will finish the story
"Wish the author will finish the story and update on time for proper connection of the story "
