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All or nothing

"This has been interesting so far . I don't wanna lie I am obsessed with Michelle Torlot stories . I've read most of her stories and one thing I can say is that they'll keep you wanting and coming for more.She is a great writer . Thank you Michelle Torlot for your great stories and I hope we get the next chapter soon🤍"

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All or Nothing

"I like the flow of the story, waiting to see how the plot develops. You have captured the characters very well, I feel like I know them. Grammar and punctuation is excellent Well done, I look forward to reading more "

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Mrs.

"I thoroughly enjoy this book. It is well written, exciting and absorbibg. I shall search for more books of this author"

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addicted to it.

"who needs dr-gs when you can get addicted to 'all or nothing'. it got me hooked up to the storyline. it's been long enough that i read something so good. on internet, there are thousands of free books, and it's rare to find one with good writing style and such a great story line, and this one is a gem. the story line is addictive, and i am yearning for that plot development. an abused fighter and a mafia lord? damn. all the free books only have, soft heart, naive and absolutely stupid female leads, sorry not sorry. but this change in the female lead is refreshing and what the internet needs more. i love how the male lead isn't trying to dominate the female lead. i don't want the female lead to end like all the female leads in mafia books do, can't lift a gun or protect themselves. i want her to learn a way to survive with the help of kane, learn to lead the mafia beside him. another thing i love about the storyline is that jamie doesn't fall in love with kane the moment she laid her eyes on him, or think of him as handsome, and focused on the reality. she is falling for him gradually, which is just a relief for a realistic like me. the writing style of author is just too good. the way she explains the emotions of the characters makes me feel like i have met the characters. sometimes the fillers of their emotions makes me want to skip some paragraphs, but it's an urge i can control. another thing, i did notice few grammatical mistakes here and there, nothing that an editing of the chapters will rectify. whenever i see a new updates, i get so excited, and after reading them, i end up wanting more."

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Tracey

"Yes yes I’ve waited for so long to read this story I’m so glade it’s back thank you can’t wait to read more I love Kane so much"

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Oh im addicted

"Please update. This is amazing "

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Like that the plot is filling out

"I like the direction it is going in... if the level is kept for the rest of the book bodes well for the future"

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Good

"Yes I like, yes I recommend, yes I give good ratings. Good good. Very nice. He make her a wife, yes very nice."

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Great read

"Good back story and character development "

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Good

"To the clinic and I will be rearranging the same time as I have to go home now napapata and I will be in the office tomorrow morning and will be able to come to the office tomorrow afternoon to pick up the keys "

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