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Love

"Hate entitled men Definitely will recomm"

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Lovely story

"Aaaaah, this is such a sweet story so far. Cant wait for the middle and the end to see what's going to happen."

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Always loved you

"Avery cute story to pass the time of day I’m glad they finally got back together and had a beautiful child "

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Blowing hot and cold

"Sweet short story loved it"

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Nice Turn

"I read this story in 20 minutes. It was a good read for a short story. I like a quick love story with just enough realism that one can relate to. Good job author!"

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Flat

"The writing is flat, scripted. I don't feel any emotions reading this. "

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