The World SMP

"On chapter one, you can tell the main character misses his brother. I feel bad for the maid, just doing her job then she gets yelled at. Sunday morning must smell good lol- His father seems rather harsh on him, especially with the language, though I've seen DSMP sooo, the story isn't as bad. The running away seems a bit romantic not counting hopping out the window. The first chapter is good, the plot is a bit confusing, otherwise good, hoping to see another chapter."